Tuesday, March 9, 2010

working thesis and summary

Working Thesis: Although there are many contributing factors to obesity and unhealthy weight in adolescents, parents have the most influence and control over their children.

The first source that I found was a study on obesity's role as a significant health problem among adolescents and whether or not incorporating prevention programs in school was successful or not. I found some good information -- statistics, influences of parental behavior, and children directly quoting that they blamed their parents for their eating habits.

1 comment:

  1. Felicia, I think you're on the right track with this topic. Remember to include the names of your sources and their authors (for your own benefits and for the benefit of your readers).

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